Saturday, August 2, 2008

Forgive me for my sins...



Guys this is a rap which I made after thinking about my life and also thinkin about religion, peace and justice.

Heavenly God, Please hear me tonight...
I need so much guidance to live my life right...

Sometimes the pressure is so hard to bear...

I often wonder if anyone else cares?

How can I wake up and face a new day...

knowing I must live my life this crazy way?


Heavenly God, forgive me for my sins...

Give me the strength to resist the wild life I desire...

Help me escape the temptation and the fire...

Please help my family...

whose eyes silently plead for me not to do wrong and they pray for me...
God bless our mothers who cry every night...

worrying we will be killed by someone in a fight...

Heavenly God please answer my prayers....

Please let me know that you're listening up there....
When wil it end? What is it all for?

To prove my homies I am "down and legit" or that I am "hardcore"?

Sometimes I wonder how I will die...

By a bullet wound or a knife stab in my side??

Heavenly God please hear me and forgive me for my sins....


Show me the way God, show me the light...

Give my heart peace so that I wont have to fight...

Thank you for your forgiveness and still being there...

Most of all, thank you for hearing my prayer...

7 comments:

Anonymous said...

well elly its touching ... so who did u write this for once again it touch my heart ... good job el-tro

Irufan said...

yea...it is a nice one which i jux rite out of the blue...life makes u think hard u kno...thats how it rolls...

Nadh said...

hei el..:)
beautifully written...^_^
may God bless you and listen to your prayers....amen!

Take care El ^_^

Nadh said...

Hei El

Beautifully written...^_^

May God bless you and listen to your prayers...amen!

Take care!^_^

Irufan said...

LOL u posted twice!! dusnt matter anyhow..

yeah..thanx...

Cute Kat Princez said...

awe ell...v touchin...hope u find ur true path...may god give u streghth n justice..:)...amen...

very well done el...

Irufan said...

thanx ^_^